In the above paragraph, the writer is considering revising the underlined portion of the sentence in number 5 to read:

In urban inner cities, the situation is often thought to be even more critical due to nutritional imbalance caused by easy access to abundant fast-food restaurants on one hand and lack of large supermarket grocery stores on the other hand.

Should the writer make this revision here?

A
Yes, because it provides specific examples of nutritional imbalance.

B
Yes, because it introduces the topic of supermarket grocery store that will be examined later on in the passage.

C
No, because it lists information that does not assist the development of claims made in this paragraph.

D
No, because it interrupts the discussion on the importance of healthy foods.

2 answers

C. No, because it lists information that does not assist the development of claims made in this paragraph.

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