In life, children in an early childhood age 2 to 6 years old sometimes must deal with life and adapt to difficult situations that change the way they feel about it. When a Pet Dies by Fred Rogers is a book that deals with death. It helps the child share their real feelings about a dying pet with parents and that crying was a good way to feel better. My family’s Changing by Pat Thomas is another book that deals with divorce. It’s about how a baby develops and the changes that happen during pregnancy. Before You Were Born by Jennifer Davis talks about dealing with sex. It talked about how a human being is born and the major changes that he goes through in life. These books can help children understanding the feeling of compassion, and bond between each family member as children gets older.
When a Pet Dies shows how a young child lost a pet and very sad about it and parents think that it’s natural to cry about this. It teaches the value of having a friend and they can appreciate this book because pet can show them some life lessons such as feelings, love, and issues. Since children can’t express themselves to others; pets are the only thing to share their happiness. My family’s Changing is when parents decide to divorce and no longer live together this makes the child think that they did something wrong. Children will have to learn to do some things differently. Before You Were Born talked about the family feeling happy about their first baby and all the process that happens during pregnancy.
In other way children in middle childhood age 7 to 11 years old have to feel less afraid about dealing with life changes. The Kids Book about Death and Dying by Eric E. Rofes is a book dealing with death. Talking about death helps children to accept it and drawing pictures about death is better for them to be less scared. Dr.Ruth Talks to kids by Dr.Ruth Westheimer is another book that deals with sex. She talks about boys and girls and the physical changes and that the more the child the better they can deal with sexual issues. Pre teen Pressures Divorce by Debra Goldentyer talks about divorce. It talked about group of parents joining a support group to talk about how they feel about each other, what the best choices to do and how the child the going to react from the changes.
Bronfenbrenner’s ecological theory By Bronfenbrenner and Morris for age 2 to 6 years old talks about environmental factors is important for child development. If parents were to talk to children about death, divorce and being born it will feel scary and sad for them and would have to start hanging out with friends to feel better about the changes. Erickson’s theory and identity by Eric Erickson for age 7 to 11 years old that wants to know answers to their questions like who they are and what kind of life they want to lead.
need help with proofreading for mistakes and help to make the theories (one for age 2- 6 years old) and the other ( 8-11 years old) to connect with the books topic i said.
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Look a couple of example sentences. First, I think, is your thesis:
<<These books can help children understanding the feeling of compassion, and bond between each family member as children gets older. >> First, understanding or understand?
Then, the comma followed by "bond between each family member as children gets older"
I assume you did not read that.
Then the second thing is your closing paragraph.
<<Bronfenbrenner’s ecological theory By Bronfenbrenner and Morris for age 2 to 6 years old talks about environmental factors is important for child development. If parents were to talk to children about death, divorcecomma here? and being born it will feel scary and sad for them and would have to start hanging out with friends to feel better about the changes. Erickson’s theory and identity by Eric Erickson for age 7 to 11 years old that wants to know answers to their questions like who they are and what kind of life they want to lead.>>
One last sentence: and that the more the child the better they can deal with sexual issues.
My point is this. Either English is not your native language, or, you haven't even looked at your own writing. You can do better than this.
Yes, we can proof, critique, and suggest changes, but this is not ready for that yet.
On thing that would help is what is the purpose of the essay? I thought I sensed a thesis, but never did you write of compassion again.
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