In a paragraph of 3–5 sentences, first write a sentence that uses a shift in voice. Then explain why the shift is incorrect. Finally, write a sentence that corrects the shift.(2 points)

Answer 1

Incorrect shift in voice: She told him she loved him, but he wasn't sure if he believed it.

Explanation of incorrect shift: The shift in voice from third person to first person is jarring and confusing for readers.

Corrected sentence: She told him she loved him, but he wasn't sure if he believed her.