I recently discovered that the book Fallen, by Lauren Kate. Fallen is a series.<~~How can it be both a book AND a series?? Lauren wrote the book very well.<~~What do you mean by "very well"? Be specific. As I read I felt as if I was there in the book too. It felt like<~~wrong word I was watching a movie. <~~How did the author accomplish this?
Teenagers will love this book! <~~ALL teenagers? That's quite a generalization! How do you know this? It has romance, and every girl loves romance.<~~OOO, now THERE'S another sweeping generalization if I ever saw one! How do you know that "every girl" loves romance? I love this book. I am a big fan of romance and sure enough when I first read it I fell in love.b><~~Fell in love with what? The book came alive as you<~~Me? I haven't read it! read it, and you<~~Me?? could feel the main characters<~~wrong word feelings.<~~How did the author accomplish this?
Imagine that you are an agent who is interested in publishing new authors. Choose any book you like and present the book to a publisher in New York. You want to be the person responsible for putting the book on the shelf. You should convince the publisher that the book is well worthy and will do well once it is published. Use persuasive language and details from the book to prove your point.
I need some more ideas please?
That's what I have so far.
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To whom it may concern,
I recently discovered that the book "Fallen, by Lauren Kate". Fallen is a series. Lauren wrote the book very well. As I read I felt as if I was there in the book too. It felt like I was watching a movie.
Teenagers will love this book! It has romance, and every girl loves romance. I love this book. I am a big fan of romance and sure enough when I first read it I fell in love. The book came alive as you read it, and you could feel the main characters feelings.
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Is "Fallen" a book or a series?
What did Kate do that made you say it was written well?
Does every girl love romance? Really?
Why did you fall in love? What specifically caused this hormonal reaction?
In the last sentence -- I haven't read it. Get rid of "you."
You need to be more specific about what in this book (series?) will draw readers to it?
What did Kate do that made you say it was written well?
Does every girl love romance? Really?
Why did you fall in love? What specifically caused this hormonal reaction?
In the last sentence -- I haven't read it. Get rid of "you."
You need to be more specific about what in this book (series?) will draw readers to it?
Stupid! -__-Yeah thanks for helping all you guys were doing was being mean! -__-
Neither of us was being mean. If you work on answering the questions each of us asked, you'll be able to clarify and expand on your write-up.
Mostly you need to include details and examples of the general statements you made. Once you do that, feel free to re-post if you'd like someone to read over your work before you submit it. Just make sure you don't take offense when all we are trying to do is help you see what's missing.
Mostly you need to include details and examples of the general statements you made. Once you do that, feel free to re-post if you'd like someone to read over your work before you submit it. Just make sure you don't take offense when all we are trying to do is help you see what's missing.
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