I'm writing my essay on the book Edward's eyes and my essay is about the three types of themes in the book. The first theme is about the closeness of a familys relationship to each other. How would I write my topic sentence for my first paragraph. I'm confused

Answer 1

One theme in this story is the closeness of a family.

... or something like that.

Answer 2

Remember not to be wordy! Too many convoluted sentences will turn your readers off right away!

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm