I'm writing a review and want to say that "xxx is what pushes the story forward" but with a more elegant and correct formulation. English is not my first language so I don't know all the expressions and such but I think that there is a proper expression for that. Would be kind if someone could help me out! /Hanna

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I'm writing a review and want to say that "xxx is what pushes the story forward" but with a more elegant and correct formulation. English is not my first language so I don't know all the expressions and such but I think that there is a proper expression for that. Would be kind if someone could help me out! /Hanna

Hanna · Answer

please help me :( I also have another question.. do you say "show to" or "show for"?

Zahra · Answer

You can say 'xxx makes the story better' or 'more interesting' Hope this helps :-)