To what does "this" refer? "...that this is able to be argued against." That is, what are you trying to argue against? That there aren't fast-food restaurants in the Eastern Hemisphere?
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I'm writing a paper on globalization and my thesis is that American fast-food restaurants are finding its way into countries in the eastern hemisphere. I'm having trouble coming up with analyzed content that this is able to be argued against. Are there any specific areas that you can suggest that I should discuss in my paper?
Thank you!
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Sorry, I meant "that my thesis is able to be supported and argued for."
I'm trying to establish the fact that the food culture in the eastern hempisphere is being westernized as a result of globalization... Is the previous statement itself another thesis or am I just restating my original thesis?
I'm trying to establish the fact that the food culture in the eastern hempisphere is being westernized as a result of globalization... Is the previous statement itself another thesis or am I just restating my original thesis?
Your thesis ~~> "American fast-food restaurants are finding its way into countries in the eastern hemisphere."
"...the food culture in the eastern hempisphere is being westernized as a result of globalization."
The second sentence supports your thesis IF you go on to explain and give examples of "globalization." In other words, make sure you don't assume that your readers will understand exactly what you mean by any particular term or phrase in your paper.
I think you can support your thesis very well. Just beware of assuming that your readers will get your point simply because you say it's so!
"...the food culture in the eastern hempisphere is being westernized as a result of globalization."
The second sentence supports your thesis IF you go on to explain and give examples of "globalization." In other words, make sure you don't assume that your readers will understand exactly what you mean by any particular term or phrase in your paper.
I think you can support your thesis very well. Just beware of assuming that your readers will get your point simply because you say it's so!