Im working on poetry at school and I'm suppose to make a limerick. The rhyme scheme is aabba. I'm now just having trouble on the last one.

Question

Be my friend, I plead.
A friend is all I need.
Please be the one that I can trust.
Don't ever let our friendship rust.

Help?

Answer 1

friendship rust? Hmmmm.
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you don't know.

Answer 2

You need to work on the rhythm and number of syllables in each line, in addition to the rhyme.

http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm