Im trying to make sure I am using correct grammar and to make it sound on a 5th grade level.See if you can come up with a better heading for this information.

Other Information About Mrs. walker.

We all have been taught that the hot comb (straighten or pressing comb) was invinvented by Madam CJ Walker the self-made millionaire. Truth be told, the comb was actually used by a French woman and 1845, who was trying to copy the styles worn in the ancient Egyptian. The comb was actually sold in Sears and Bloomingdales to the American public in 1800s. It is not a known inventor of the comb but there are facts that Mrs. Walker did not invent the hot comb. She only redesignd the comb by giving it wide spaced teeth so that it could better accommodate thicker hair and various textures.

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Is your teacher stupid? It is not rocket science to see you plagarized (look that word up, your teacher knows it) this. https://blackgirllonghair.com/2010/09/the-history-of-the-hot-comb/

We are not going to help you cheat by copying and then changing a few words.