I'm struggling to incorporate a counter claim in my body paragraphs. I don't know how to without making it sound choppy if not totally forgetting i.e:

"To begin with, math shouldn't be a required course because it causes stress, according to www.mathisn'tfun.com, math is proven to increase a student's stress by 15%. You may argue that math is required after the 5th grade level but unless you want to be a math-matician, the "real world" doesn't require mathematic lessons."

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so what do u mean can u explain that better plz
To begin, math should not be a required course as it causes stress. According to www.mathisntfun.com, math has been shown to raise a student's stress by 15%. You may argue that math is required beyond the fifth grade, but unless you want to be a mathematician, the "real world" does not demand mathematic lessons.
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