I'm sorry but after asking for help and looking up several websites on how to write a really good thesis statement, I don't think I can make one. So I am asking can you please help me by writing it. I tried but I came up with three terrible ones.
In “When Grizzlies Walked Upright”, the bears relation changed before and after the introduction of the female into their clan, and both the bears and female contributed to their community.
The bears relation with each other changed completely before and after the female arrive but both the bears and the female made contributions to their community.
With the introduction of the female, it changed the bears relation significantly from before and the bears and female help make contributions to their community.
So please help me
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Frankly, in the version I read, no difference was noted.