To increase tension and mystery, you could introduce a cursed forest that only reveals its secrets under specific conditions, such as when the moon is full. As Cora searches for Ruky, she begins to encounter strange, magical creatures that both aid and hinder her quest, leaving her unsure of whom to trust. Additionally, Ruky, in his crow form, could discover he is not alone among the crows, and they are involved in a plot that could threaten the forest itself, forcing him to make difficult choices between returning to Cora or helping his new companions. This twist would not only heighten the stakes but also complicate Cora’s journey as she grapples with the consequences of her words and her growing understanding of the complexities around her brother’s transformation.
I'm reading a book about two siblings who live in a cottage in the forest. The older sibling is a girl named Cora and the younger one is named Ruky. One day, Cora gets mad at Ruky and tells him she wishes he turned into a crow and fly away. And so it happened. Cora regrets her words and goes out to find her little brother and finally finds him.
In 3–5 sentences, describe changes you could make to the dream subplot that would increase tension, mystery, or surprise in the story.
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