I'm having trouble with an introduction. What is the correct way to write an intro and good ways for a leading sentance? please and thanks

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Your opening sentence must grab your audience's attention. You can use a shocking fact or brief anecdote to immediately involve your audience. Your introductory paragraph should be brief and end with your thesis statement. Be sure to make it clear in this paragraph what you want the audience to do or believe.

These sites may also help you.

http://www.studygs.net/wrtstr4.htm

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/types.html
thanks
You're welcome. If you post your introductory paragraph, we'll be glad to critique it.
I havent written it yet, but when I do, ill post it