I'm also noticing that theres some sort of problem with this paragraph but I...I don't know. Like im nots sure if its the right example and if it links to intolerance.

The only figurative device that is completely and effectively used in this text is first person. The use of first person in Night can give better convey the incidents Wiesel encounters throughout his time in the concentration camps, and allows the audience to look at the scenario through Wiesel’s perspective. ”I gave him what was left of my soup. But my heart was heavy. I was aware I was doing it grudgingly.” This shows Wiesel’s change in attitude due to the conditions the Jews were kept in – having a small ration of food – because they were Jews.

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The only figurative device that is completely and effectively used in Night is first-person perspective. The use of first person conveys the incidents Wiesel encounters in the concentration camps and allows the audience to see and feel everything through Wiesel’s eyes. ”I gave him what was left of my soup. But my heart was heavy. I was aware I was doing it grudgingly.” This shows Wiesel’s change in attitude due to the conditions the Jews were kept in – having a small ration of food – because they were Jews.

I made some changes in the text, mostly to get rid of wordiness and repetition. Also, you need to reconsider that last sentence. The last sentence needs to expand on Weisel's emotions and the reasons for those emotions.

If you want to make sure the connection with intolerance is made, then you need to include the idea that he realizes he does things "grudgingly," just as his captors do, no doubt.
What about this?

In regards to this quote, it shows the change and selfishness in Wiesel’s attitude due to the small ration of food given to him by the German soldiers as he was a Jew.