Identify the sentence that is punctuated correctly.
a Give me a call tomorrow, veronica, when you get home, so we can discuss the details of the upcoming event.
b. Give me a call tomorrow, Veronica, when you get home so we can discuss the detail of the upcoming event.
c. Give me a call tomorrow, Veronica when you get home, so we can discuss the detail of the upcoming events.
Give me a call tomorrow Veronica when you get home so we can discuss the details of the upcoming event.
4 answers
Besides the typo of not capitalizing the "V" in Veronica's name, A is grammatically correct.
This is a terrible sentence. The words "when you get home" should be omitted.
Either that, or it should be expressed in two sentences.
Either that, or it should be expressed in two sentences.
Or --
When you get home tomorrow, Veronica, please give me a call so we can discuss the details of the upcoming event.
When you get home tomorrow, Veronica, please give me a call so we can discuss the details of the upcoming event.
A is the correct answer.