You could start it that way, but you might find a better way by studying this site.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
I writing a compare/contrast essay on movie i watched that be smke signals. i got my thematic statement done, and i have to do thesis now, this is what teacher say
Thesis: introduce the story and tag it.
I not get how to start thesis? do i say In the story....
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thanks ms. sue
only thing i not get is that for thesis which be section 2: it say introduce story and tag it, and introduce the two main characers to theme then for section 3: it say give background information, briefly explain story-line, five w's and how, do this not be the same thing as section 2?
only thing i not get is that for thesis which be section 2: it say introduce story and tag it, and introduce the two main characers to theme then for section 3: it say give background information, briefly explain story-line, five w's and how, do this not be the same thing as section 2?
Also Ms. Sue I have thematic statement done in which i have to choose a theme that connect the two main characters, and i needed to write global statement and this need to connect with thesis statement. i wrote on friendship that be theme in movie, but i don't want to make thesis same like thematic.
I'm sorry, but I don't really know what your teacher wants. Please make an appointment and ask for his/her help.
ok thanks ms. sue :)