I write again,bcause yesterdeay nobody could really help we with this homework :(

Question

Hello everybody!
Today a I have to write a complain letter to "my"boss.I should write about my difficulties,and about what's bothering me. In the letter I should propose a solution as well.

The situation is: Me(Julie,47 years old)has worked as a secretary in an NHS Trust for 21 years.she had always enjoyed her job until the arrival of a new boss in the departement.
'In my experience,bullies are clever people.Theyplay colleagues off against each other until the athmosphere is so tense that going to work feels like a perpetual visit to the dentist. My bully-my manager's boss-completely obliterated the office where I worked.Sometimes she criticised me to my face,other times indirectly,telling my manager to tell me that my skirt was too short,mae-up too heavy und perfume too strong. Towards the end she even made me tell my boss when I needed to go to te toilet.I was so stressed that my doctor signed me off. When I returned to work,two weeks later,my job had been split between two hospitals three miles apart,which was unnecessary and unaccetable. Eventually I refused to work for her any more and was transferred.Althought I did stand up for myslf,I'm still angry. She's robbed me of many more happy years working in a job I enjoyed with people I liked'

So guys if you can help me,please do so!!!!!!

Thanks for the help!!!!!!
xoxo

Answer 1

1) YOu did not propose a soluton.
2) You put a lot of things in the letter that are somewhat overly detailed. The issue you didn't address, the most important issue, was what was your performance? Nobody cares about your feelings at work.

I would address these two things above. What does my doctor signed me off mean? That is not common English.

Answer 2

I guess it means that he said I should not go to work,bcause I stressed.
but this is just the text,we should read and than write a letter.
Can you help me?

Answer 3

Go back and look at your post yesterday. You suggested some solutions to the problem.

We also discussed the format.

Now you need to write the letter, starting with your desired solution.

Dear XXXX:

As a former employee, I believe I would benefit the company if rehired.

Take it from there.