I was writing this sentences, could you check it, please.

Sue hasn’t eaten any fruit or vegetables for a while.

Ned started to eat healthier food last year.

Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.

Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.

Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.

Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
Thanks

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Sue hasn’t eaten any fruit or vegetables for a while.
OK

Ned started to eat healthier food last year.
OK

Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.
Not OK

Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.
Not OK

Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.
Not OK

Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
OK, but sounds a little odd.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/confusion.htm#double_negatives

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sequence.htm
Sue has never visited a doctor on a regular basis.

Ned had lived a quiet life before they met.

Ned hasn’t smoked heavily when he was young.
The first two are fine now.

The last one, however, is still weird. This would work: Ned didn't smoke heavily when he was young.
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