I was skiing and I broke my leg. The guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!
Which revision below most effectively uses transition words to create coherence?
I was skiing and then I broke my leg. A guy came out of nowhere and that’s when he knocked me down!
I was skiing and I broke my leg. Then the guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!
I broke my leg when I was skiing. What happened was this guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!
I was skiing when a guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down, breaking my leg!
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I was skiing when a guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down, breaking my leg!