I want to make an argumentative essay but I'm really bad at making a good thesis. My current thesis is: Girls and boys should be allowed to play with the same type of toy. My argumentative essay is going to be about how children's toys are often divided by gender and that girls and guys shouldn't be forced to play with a gender-specific toy. Can someone help me make my thesis stronger/give me an example?

Answer 1

This has some excellent ideas for writing thesis statements.

https://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Answer 2

https://www.powa.org/

Click on Convince at the top, and follow directions. With this and the link Ms. Sue gave you, you should do well.