You use the word jilted a lot and although it may be the word used in the title of the short story it's gets really repetitive in the "essay" (it's kinda short to be called an essay.)
You might want to consider doing a new paragraph at "However, Granny never forgets..."
I didn't see any grammar errors but I'm terrible at catching those.
I want it to be proofread. You can make changes if you lke. This essay is about the themes in the short story The Jilting of Granny Weatherall.
A portrait of an eighty-year-old woman on her deathbed, ''The Jilting of Granny Weatherall'' is an exploration of the human mind as it struggles to come to terms with loss and mortality. The short story, by Katherine Anne Porter, takes place in Granny’s room at her daughter Cornelia’s house. The story is centered around the protagonist, Granny Weatherall, living out her final days. Years ago Granny had been jilted at the altar, and now she is being jilted in death. The story illustrates the concept of refusing to forgive, as well as living in the past.
Granny Weatherall was to marry George sixty years earlier. However, he never showed, leaving her jilted at the altar. Granny thought to herself, “What does a woman do when she has put on the white veil and set out the white cake for a man who doesn’t come?” (133) She eventually married another man, who seemed to be her knight in shining armor. After all, John saved her from the embarrassment of being left at the altar. She later had a family, and convinced herself that she had put the pain of being jilted behind her. However, Granny never forgets nor does she forgive George. She kept letters from him in her attic all her life, and sixty years later his memory still had the power to distress her. While lying on her deathbed Granny tells Cornelia, “I want you to find George and tell him that I forgot him. I want him to know that I had my husband just the same and my children and my house like any other woman.” (134) Granny wanted George to understand the pain and suffering he had caused. The theme of refusing to forgive flows through a large portion of this short story.
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You've included a summary of the story, which is not a good idea. You need to move your last sentence nearer to the beginning of the second paragraph (only two? that's not much of an essay), and then focus ONLY ON WHAT WOULD SUPPORT THAT SENTENCE. Simply summarizing the story's plot doesn't give the emphasis you need.
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