I urgently need you to check this rephrase.I added another sentence.

"The ice did split with a thunder-fit;
The helmsman steered us through."

1) The ice split as (?) the sound of the thunder and the helmsman steered them through.
2) The white Moon glimmered through a white smokey fog.

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Both sentences are fine.

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