I urgently need you to check these sentences, too. Thank you.

1) Hi Andrew, how are you?
I ‘m very well because I spent a very beautiful weekend with both my family and my friends.
2) On Saturday morning I played tennis with my father whereas in the afternoon I went out with my friends.
3) At half past six we went to the cinema and saw a film called “Immature, the Travel”.
4) It was a very funny comedy. When I was at the cinema , my parents decided to join us for an evening out.
5) We had a pizza together and after that all my friends came to my house and stayed there till one o’clock.
When they left, I was tired but happy. I had a really nice day.

1 answer

1. OK

2. 2 commas needed.

3. comma needed

4. OK

5. comma needed
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