i starting to write a descriptive story and i have to switch on and off from reality like in Walter Mitty story. so I think of writing about childhood having flashbacks of past. but i not know how starting it off.

Answer 1

Why don't you start your story like Thurber started "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty?" You could use dialogue from one of the fantasies.

"We're going through!" The Commander's voice was like thin ice breaking.

Answer 2

thanks ms. sue :) that great idea!

Answer 3

You're welcome, Mohammad.