I remember reading a novel called “Tuck Everlasting,” which was about everlasting life.

Question

Is this worded correctly? Or should the word about be replaced

Answer 1

Looks o.k. to me.

Answer 2

I also found that to keep myself engaged in anything I do I cannot bog myself down on the workload I am given.

Am I missing a comma anywhere? This is a sentence a part of my essay.