Lily -- the only question I see that you've posted -- and that was less than 1/2 hour ago.
"i just had a question. if i write down an essay a sort one can someone read it and tell me if its in the level that i want it to be in and/or give me some suggestions on how to improve it? Please answer because im applying for a program and need all the help i can get."
The tutor who often proofreads essays has not been online in the last couple of hours. However, your questions show a lack of attention to simple things like spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.
Please post your essay AFTER you've proofread it for spelling, capitalization, and punctuation, someone may be able to help you.
I really don't like the fact that you guys are skipping so many questions we need help here and were not getting it. i understand that no one knows everything but, please don't skip the questions its really hard when i need help and no one is helping me. The least you can do is to give a starters guideline. im really disappointed
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Please post your essay AFTER you've proofread it for spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. Then someone may be able to help you.