I raced down the street; my feet pounded on the sidewalk. I gasped for air, but I couldn't let my sister down because she was having a terrible day.
I raced down the street my feet pounded on the sidewalk I wasn’t going to get there in time. My lungs burned I gasped for air I kept sprinting. I couldn’t let my sister down she was having a terrible day I wanted to cheer her up. The houses were a blur as I zoomed past I almost crashed into a mailbox. Time was running out I ran even faster sweat poured down my back. I rounded the corner just before the ice cream truck started its engine I screamed, “Wait!”
1. Copy the paragraph into the text box. Rewrite the paragraph so there are no run-ons, but here’s the catch: you have to follow these rules!
Add no more than three commas.
Add at least one semicolon.
Add at least two conjunctions (like “but” or “because”). more the 25 words less then 30 words
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