i need to write a process paragraph about how yeast causes bread to rise.

i was wondering if this was good.

Yeast is the essential cells of Saccharomyces cervisiae waiting to be activated. Take a half cup of warm water or milk in a bowl, and add a teaspoon of sugar. Then slowly put in your package of yeast, let sit for ten minutes. Within a few minutes of exposure to warm water or milk, the yeast begins to bubble up and expand. These cells come to life exposed to sugar and digesting portions of it. This rapid, eating digestion cycle begins to release gas bubbles of carbon dioxide and small amounts of ethanol alcohol. In turn, the pockets of gas bubbles trapped in the dough, cause the rising action. Too much salt can inhibit the rising action. Therefore, as i like to bake, there would be no homemade bread.

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Yeast is the essential cells of Saccharomyces (CAP?) cervisiae waiting to be activated. Take a half cup of warm water or milk in a bowl, (NO COMMA) and add a teaspoon of sugar. Then slowly put in your package of yeast, let sit for ten minutes. Within a few minutes of exposure to warm water or milk, the yeast begins to bubble up and expand. These cells come to life ("WHEN"?) exposed to sugar and digesting portions of it. This rapid, eating digestion cycle begins to release gas bubbles of carbon dioxide and small amounts of ethanol alcohol. In turn, the pockets of gas bubbles trapped in the dough, (NO COMMA) cause the rising action. Too much salt can inhibit the rising action. Therefore, as i (CAP) like to bake, there would be no homemade bread.

If your information is correct, it is fine, except for the last sentence. It is unclear what this has to do with the previous information.

I hope this helps.
ok thank you but what is cap?
Cap means capitilize. At the end CAP is referring to your uncapitalized i.