I need to turn this into a really good thesis statement . In the myth " When Grizzlies walked Upright" explain how the bears lived in relation to each other before and after the introduction of the female into their clan, and explain how both the bears and female contributed to their community.

Question

So is this good: The bears lived in relation to each other before and after the arrival of the female into their clain, and both the bears and female contributed to their community through.....

Answer 1

No.

Please follow the directions in the web site I linked in this post.

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