I need to know if this is a good narrative paragraph on sharing the telephone.

Question

Saturday morning Hailey and Melissa wanted the phone at 7oclock. I quickly told them that it was too early to call someone. After Hailey and Melissa started to argue, Melissa proceeded to make a phone call. Then I told her they needed to wait. We waited for two hours. Later there was a fight to use the phone. I finally told them that they needed to share the phone and take turns.

Answer 1

Yes, that is a good narrative paragraph.