I need someone to proofread this and give me some suggestions on this paper?

Do the following:
"A Plan of Action".
How can the A Plan of Action help you address a current problem or challenge you are having with school?”

My Problem/Challenge:
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Obtaining good grades to keep financial aid, great effort and strain from not accepting the pressure for comprehending m school work, and shopping for new clothes

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as My 1st oldest child accomplished
2. Successful billed coder
3. To purchase my own property

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My Problem/Challenge: ???
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Earning good grades to keep financial aid,<~~OK, understood great effort and strain from not accepting the pressure for comprehending m school work,<~~I don't understand what this means and shopping for new clothes <~~OK

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as my oldest child did.
2. Successful billed coder
3. To purchase my own property
#1 is a complete sentence; make #s 2 and 3 complete sentences, too.
My Problem/Challenge:Struggling to become a successful student/mother/wife
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Obtaining good grades to keep financial aid, I will keep great effort and avoid straining my brains , so that it will not accept the pressure for comprehending my school work, and shopping for new clothes

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as My 1st oldest child accomplished
2.I want to become a successful billed coder.
3.I would like to purchase my own property someday in the near future.

My Problem/Challenge: To become a successful student
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Earning good grades to keep financial aid,To obtain great effort and restrain from not accepting the pressure"stress" for comprehending my school work, and shopping for new clothes

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as my oldest child did.
2. I want to become a successful billed coder
3. I would like to purchase my own property in the near future.
To obtain great effort and restrain from not accepting the pressure"stress" for comprehending my school work,...
This still doesn't make sense. Do you mean not becoming overly stressed when you don't understand your school work?

billed coder
This doesn't make sense either. Do you mean billing coder?
How can the A Plan of Action help you address a current problem or challenge you are having with school?”


My Problem/Challenge: To become a successful student
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Earning good grades to keep financial aid, I’m not becoming overly stressed when I don't understand my school work?
, and shopping for new clothes

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as my oldest child did.
2. I want to become a successful billing coder
3. I would like to purchase my own property in the near future.
I need this proofread for final submission please!

How can the A Plan of Action help you address a current problem or challenge you are having with school?”

My Problem/Challenge: To become a successful student
The Tools I Have: Family members, study guides, and fellow peers
The People That Can Help Me: Study partners in my class, a tutor, my teacher
The Rewards I’ll Give Myself for Seeing it Through: Earning good grades to keep financial aid, I’m not becoming overly stressed when I don't understand my school work?
, and shopping for new clothes

List three ways you could see your life improving as a result of successfully addressing this problem.

These could be positive changes that occur in the immediate future or down the road.

1. I want to see my youngest 2 children graduate as my oldest child did.
2. I want to become a successful billing coder
3. I would like to purchase my own property in the near future.
How can the A Plan
of Action help you address a current problem or challenge you are having with
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