I need help writing a thesis for my history day project, my person is Sacagawea and this years theme is leaders and their short and long term legacies. I don't exactly know where to start.
Sacagawea has played a big role in the discovery of Louisisana territory, making her one of Americas most influential females in history.
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You have a very good thesis. However, omit the word "has."
I also have- Sacagawea played a significant role in the Corps of Discovery journey, making her one of America's most influential females in history.
Your first thesis is better, including Ms. Sue's correction.
what is a thesis?