Read the entire webpage (below) carefully, including the sample essay. And remember that in a true thesis statement, you must take a stand, include your opinion — it needs to be arguable.
http://guidetogrammar.org/grammar/composition/classification.htm
I need help with writing my thesis on music genres.
I turned in my pre-writing to my instructor with this thesis:
Thesis: Music carries power with its many different genres, and its power to make people feel different ways is very strong. The different types of genres, for example, include rock and roll, hip hop, and pop. These three genres of music make people feel an array of different emotions, for example, the rock n’ roll genre can make someone feel happy all the way to anger.
However, they said that I did not provide a personal stance that can be argued or proved.
Can someone please provide their opinion or advise how I can make this thesis better? To provide a personal stance on music genres?
Thank you for your time :)
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