I need help for my Personal Statement for a Masters in forensic psychology

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How would you like us to help you?

Why do you want to be a forensic psychologist?
I am writing my Personal Statement and I have a draft, I would like to know if you can proofread it and give me some suggestions or editing if needed.

I do want to be a forensic psychologist, I'm applying for a Taught Masters.
After you've corrected the obvious errors, we can read it over for content.