I need a thesis statement of 450 words for why renting a house is a better option than buying a homr

Answer 1

No!

A thesis statement should be only 10 to 20 words -- not 450 words!

Answer 2

Study these sites for excellent advice about writing thesis statements.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/