I must combine the following sentences in the most effective way. Is my answer correct?
Sentences:
1. He didn't cover his vehicle with the traditional camouflage.
2. He covered it with his own drawings.
My answer(s) - Not sure which is the best way:
He didn't cover his vehicle with the traditonal camouflage; instead, he covered it with his own drawings.
OR Instead of covering his vehicle with the traditional camouflage, he covered it with his own drawings.
1 answer
Both are correct, but I like the second one better.