I like vegetable soup. It is good for digestion. The following are the ingredients: two carrots, one radish, five mushrooms, many leeks, and two eggplants.
1. First, wash the plants clean. You have to get rid of chemicals, so prepare a big bowl of water and add one tens of the water<~~what are you adding to the bowl of water? not more water, I think, right? to the bowl. Put the ingredients in the bowl for more than 30 minutes. After that wash them clean.
2. Next, slice the ingredients,<~~delete comma and put them into the big container.
3. Heat the plants in the container and boil them.
4. Then,<~~delete comma add seasoning. Add sesame seeds and hot pepper paste powders to the vegetable soup.
5. Boil them again on the gas stove for 10 minutes.
6. After cooling the vegetable soup a little, you can enjoy tasty vegetable soup.
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I like vegetable soup. It is good for digestion. The following are the ingredients: two carrots, one radish, five mushrooms, many leeks, and two egplants.
1. First, wash the plants cleanly. You have to get rid of chemicals, so prepare a big bowl of water and add one tens of the water to the bowl. Put the ingredients in the bowl for more than 30 minutes. After that wash them cleanly.
2. Next, slice the ingredients, and put them into the big container.
3. Heat the plants in the container and boil them.
4. Then, add seasons. Add sesemes and hot pepper paste powders to the vegetable soup.
5. Boil them again on the gas stove for 10 minutes.
6. After cooling the vegetable soup a little, you can enjoy tasty vegetable soup.
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