1) We keep emailing each other in English because we both agreed to use English as the lingua franca.
2) Therefore, we must vary the application module; otherwise, both our students and teachers won't be able to join in, and our school's principal won't sign your application for a Comenius partnership.
3) After investing so much time on this project, I really hope you won't go back on your agreement.
4) Let me know about it this evening because our head science teacher has been devoting time to the project, too.
I'm not sure of the connection between needing to know "this evening" and the fact that the head sci teacher has been working on this. Should these ideas be put in different sentences, and then one idea put in a different place in the message?
I just wanted to add a few more things. I urgently need to express them.
1) We keep emailing each other (two people involved) in English because we both agreed to use English as the lingua franca.
2) Therefore, we must vary the application module; otherwise, both our students and teachers won't be able to join in and therefore our school's principal won't sign your application for a Comenius partnership.
3) After investing so much time in the project, I really hope you won't go back on your promise. (our agreements??)
4) Let me know about it this evening because our head science teacher had been devoting time to the project, too
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