Asked by Bernard

i just wanna ask if this is correct. i was making a prewritng classification and division. is not finish yet but i just wanna ask if im having a good start thanks


Title: Genres of movies
Topic announcement: Horror movies
Introduction: It is fun to watch scary movies with family or friends.
Thesis statement: These are 4 main horror genres: Monsters; Killers; and Paranormal and Psychological horror.

Body Paragraphs
Monsters
Characteristic 1: known for imaginary creature that is typically frightening, ugly, and large.
Example 1: Zombies, Vampires, and werewolf are the examples of monster movies.
Answered by Writeacher
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Everything looks good except that this is not a thesis statement:
<i>Thesis statement: These are 4 main horror genres: Monsters; Killers; and Paranormal and Psychological horror. </i>

Study this webpage and decide how you'll write a true thesis statement that includes YOUR opinion or stance in it:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

What you've written is like #1
Answered by Bernard
Thesis statement: watching horror movies is scary and can give us nigthmares.

please correct me if I'm wrong. thanks
Answered by Writeacher
Capital W on the first word.

Yes, that's MUCH better! A true thesis statement!!
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