I have to write two lines of poetry in iambic tetrameter and I am not sure if this is correct or not. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

Question

with heavy hearts untwine ourselves
yet midnight orbs demand I stay

Thank you!

Answer 1

Yes. Those two lines are in iambic tetrameter. :-)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iambic_tetrameter

Answer 2

thank you very much, Ms. Sue! Have a wonderful day!