I have to write a thesis for iy personal essay. i am choosing the time when i came to america when i was in second grade leaving my home country.

Question

My teacher just told us to come with the thesis first, but i can't put mine into words.

can you please help me?
I guess when I came to america, i was excited about the fact that i was actually going to a different country. i came from india so USA is definitley different from my home country.

I felt excited but scared of how i was going to fit into this environment. how everyone in school was going to look at me. i also couldn't believe that i was in a different country. i never thought i would live in america, but i am for ten years.

i was also sad about leaving my family behind and was thinking when i was going to see them.

now i have to write my feelings into a thesis. i don't know how to explain in a sentence how this incident effect's my life. i just don't want to write i was scared and excited. how do i make my thesis mean more me just coming to america.

Answer 1

this incident does effect my life because i plan to live here for my whole life, but i don't know how to actually write it down and tell my readers how this actually effected my life.

Answer 2

How about?

Immigrating to the United States was the most momentous event of my life.