1. Storm damage to water filtration plant #3 caused it to shut down.
This revision eliminates "minimal" and "temporarily," which are undefined. It would be better if these words were used more precisely.
2. All customers qualify for a discount.
You try the others. I'll be glad to check your work.
i have to take out embellishments, misquotations,false benefits and unethical tactics out of these sentence can some one help me
1. Storm damage done to water filtration plant #3 was mimimal. While we had to shut down temporily, servive resumed to meet residents' needs.
2.All customers qualifly for the maximum discount availiable.
3.The service contract...on the whole...applied.
4. We folow the protocols precisely with test results yielding further opportunites for experimentation.
5. All our costs were within fair-use guidelines.
6.Customers' complaints have been held to a mimimum.
7.All the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake
can someone show me how these are suppose to be wrote correctly please
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1.The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrade. rewrite: Don't understand this sentence
2.All of our costs were within fair-guidelines. rewrite: All the cost were within the guidelines.
3.Al the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake.Rewrite : All of the lots we are selling have easy access to the lake.
2.All of our costs were within fair-guidelines. rewrite: All the cost were within the guidelines.
3.Al the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake.Rewrite : All of the lots we are selling have easy access to the lake.
AN YOU CHECK THESE PLEASE:
1.We followed the protocols precisely with test results yielding further opportunities for experimentation. Rewrite: The test results of the protocols no longer will permit opportunities for future experimentation.
1.Customers' complaints have been held to a minimum. Rewrite: All of the customers’ complaints have been held to a minimum until further notice.
1.We followed the protocols precisely with test results yielding further opportunities for experimentation. Rewrite: The test results of the protocols no longer will permit opportunities for future experimentation.
1.Customers' complaints have been held to a minimum. Rewrite: All of the customers’ complaints have been held to a minimum until further notice.