I have to do a resume for school and well is it good do i need more info or what? what are your suggestions?
Hope ask
233 Crimson Avenue
Regina, SK S7H 8K9
(306) 987 - 1234
September 20, 2006
Mrs. Julie Amerigon
Human Resources Director
37 Corporate Place
Regina, SK S3K 9K8
Dear: Mrs. Julie Amerigon,
I am writing to you because I am interested in the job opportunity as working as a cashier at the shoe company. I have been to your store numerous times and I enjoy the team work. I can see myself being part of that team. Working as a cashier is something I take pride in.
I have over a year of experience as a cashier. Not only can I speak English but German as well. I am organized, reliable, and am ready to learn anything new that comes my way.
I can be reached at (306) 987 - 1234; I look forward to meeting you. Enclosed is my resume. Thank you for your time and consideration. I know I could do an excellent job for you.
Sincerely,
Hope ask
P.S I this is not really my info!
Hope ask
233 Crimson Avenue
Regina, SK S7H 8K9
(306) 987 - 1234
September 20, 2006
Mrs. Julie Amerigon
Human Resources Director
37 Corporate Place
Regina, SK S3K 9K8
Dear: Mrs. Julie Amerigon,
I am writing to you because I am interested in the position of cashier at the shoe company. I have been to your store numerous times<~~insert comma and I enjoy the teamwork. I can see myself being part of that team. Working as a cashier is something I wouldtake pride in.
I have over a year of experience as a cashier. Not only can I speak English but German as well. I am organized, reliable, and am<~~delete "am" ready to learn anything new that comes my way.
I can be reached at (306) 987 - 1234; I look forward to meeting you. Enclosed is my resume. Thank you for your time and consideration. I know I could do an excellent job for you.
Sincerely,
Hope ask
Sounds good to me -- with those few corrections.
Here is a good website that can help with any other resume or cover letter questions:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/pw/index.html
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thanks!
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