The sentence can be rewritten in formal language as follows:
"I discovered an intriguing new video game that was released yesterday."
This version conveys the same information while maintaining a formal tone.
I have 'ta tell ya about this sick new game tat just popped up outta nowhere yesterday!!!
How can this sentence be written to share the same information using formal language?
1.I discover a new, interesting video game that just released.
2.I discovered a new, interesting game that just came out!!!
3.There's an interesting new game I just found out about.
4.I found a sick,new game that just came out yesterday.
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REWRITE THAT WITH COMMAS!!
"I discovered an intriguing new video game, that was released yesterday."
it's interesting not intriguing make it right
"I discovered an interesting new video game, that was released yesterday."
take yesterday out
"I discovered an interesting new video game, that was released."
put just before released
"I discovered an interesting new video game, that was just released."
that looks way much better don't it
Yes, it does! The revised sentence is clearer and more polished. If you have any other sentences you’d like to work on or any further questions, feel free to ask!
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