I have read your article that Liane Beam Wansbrough produced, on the topic of cosmetic plastic surgery, and I am writing to express my beliefs and feelings on the topic that you have issued out. I can understand your point of view, why you chose to help young teenagers to have cosmetic surgery ,however encouraging young adults can have negative impact on their lifestyle. Plastic surgery has side effects leading quite severe pains such as: back pain, bruises and so on. This is so serious that you may have to wear head bandages after a surgery.

Question

Does this make sense how should i improve persuasive writing

Answer 1

Start by cutting it in half. Reread with a fine-toothed comb, eliminate about half of the words.