i have got the feeback that topic sentence the first setence does not have strong link recommend me topic sentence based on this pargraph: All individuals, inclusive of refugees, have the same universal right to education, health facilities and shelter. This is supported by specific subsections of 1951 Refugee Convention, specifically the right to education and to gainful employment or self-employment. (Article 17) and access to public relief and assistance, including health facilities. (Article 23). When a refugee is denied access to essential services and support, it undermines their ability to continue their lives after being forcibly displaced (United Nations, 1951).

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i have got the feeback that topic sentence the first setence  does not have strong link recommend me topic sentence based on this pargraph: All individuals, inclusive of refugees, have the same universal right to education, health facilities and shelter. This is supported by specific subsections of 1951 Refugee Convention, specifically the right to education and to gainful employment or self-employment. (Article 17) and access to public relief and assistance, including health facilities. (Article 23). When a refugee is denied access to essential services and support, it undermines their ability to continue their lives after being forcibly displaced (United Nations, 1951).
In the case of Al-Kateb v Godwin - [2004] HCA 37 - 219 CLR 562 the High Court of Australia ruled on the legality of the indefinite detention of a stateless person under Australian immigration law. Ahmed Al-Kateb, a stateless Palestinian, sought to be released from detention after his application for a visa was denied. The court ultimately held that the Migration Act allowed for the indefinite detention of a person who could not be removed from Australia, even if they were not accused of any crime. This case raised significant ethical and legal questions about the treatment of stateless individuals and the extent of government power in immigration matters. (BarNet Jade, 2004).
 The legal and ethical questions that were raised from this treatment of stateless individuals and the powers of government in immigration matters. The lack of legal protection, which links to human rights and dignity, means that they are subjected to arbitrary detention with inappropriate treatment. This method of detaining a human being indefinitely has severe impacts on individuals.
For example, reports concerning the health of asylum seekers in Australian immigration detention centres have been published. The health records of 720 asylum seeker in 2005-2006 who were detained for more than 24months experienced common devastating mental, physical health and musculoskeletal issues displays significant result than other detainees.

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The denial of access to essential services and support for refugees, as seen in the case of Al-Kateb v Godwin, raises ethical and legal concerns regarding the treatment of stateless individuals.