I have been working on a paper for a week, the first day we found out. and It is due tommorrow. I have check and rewritten entire paragraphs because I didn't think that they made sense. I have worked countless hours and finnaly handed it into my teacher for a final revision before it is due tommorrow. She crossed out numerous paragraph and in one instanse put a HUGE NO!!! through a paragraph with no explanation. When she handed it back she rolled her eyes and told me i needed to work on the focus of my paper. Any tips on how to focus better?

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I have been working on a paper for a week, the first day we found out. and It is due tommorrow.  I have check and rewritten entire paragraphs because I didn't think that they made sense.  I have worked countless hours and finnaly handed it into my teacher for a final revision before it is due tommorrow.  She crossed out numerous paragraph and in one instanse put a HUGE NO!!! through a paragraph with no explanation.  When she handed it back she rolled her eyes and told me i needed to work on the focus of my paper.  Any tips on how to focus better?

Anonymous · Answer

what is the paper on? and is what kinda of essay is it?

Tom from Mississippi · Answer

A paper explaining the Satire of Religion in Huckleberry Finn.

Tom from Mississippi · Answer

any suggestions

Writeacher · Answer

Without seeing what you already have that she doesn't like, it's impossible to help. Post what you have, and let us know what comments she made.

Anonymous · Answer

well i could tell you if you told me what type of essay it is ?
like if it is an argumentative essay, you need to start of with a topic sentence right ? and then put your arguments in order from most least important to most important .

Tom from Mississippi · Answer

I'm sorry thank you for the help any way but its a 7 page paper and its almost compleatly marked in red pen. I must get off the computer now because of lightning sorry but thank you anyway