#1. Learn to recognize and fix run-ons.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Run-on_sentence
#2. Use better words. Using "boring" and other words like that are typical of middle school students. You don't want to sound like a middle-schooler!
#3. Avoid cliches. How can you rephrase these?
... positive attitude ...
... get the job done ...
... never complain ... (really? never??)
I have a positive attitude, even with boring tasks, I still get the job done./or I never complain.
How can I phrase this into a more professional way? Thanks.
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