I had to write a page about 2020 in the perspective of Holden from Catcher in the Rye. There's more information on the document!

Any advice would be phenomenal. Places where I could change something to make it sound more like Holden, or some ideas on what I could add to make certain parts sound better, just as examples!
/docs.google.com/document/d/1KziEhxfuKCmeqj6pv8NRbgD_cIkQeC7wG9pOzfC83M8/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks a ton if you decide to help!

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No one can read your paper. That file is only on your computer.
Maybe you can copy and paste it on here if you still need it