I had to read this paragraph to see if there was any puncuation and grammar mistakes and also with the content and correct citations. I found that the person used "this" which is not appropriate because the reader doesn't what "this" is. There seems to be run-ons as well.

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What else is wrong with this paragraph?

Orwell expresses the question that is unknown to all in source G. Is one ever alone? The government is always watching every person's move, where they go, who they talk to, and their schedules. There is a reason behind this, but for now, privacy means nothing anymore. The civilization is being taken over by technology and is taking away freedom by always watching its inhabitants. No one knows when or where there are cameras, tracking devices, microphones, and so on. By this, the government is taking away peoples freedom and their ability to do as they please. On certain levels this does help society but like Orwell states, "have not only the right opinions but the right instincts." There are different opinions as to what is considered right and then wrong. People know what choices they make and they have to live with their actions and consequences. By developing these technological advances one hopes that they can decrease on the wrongs happening, even if it means that they are wronging themselves.